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forget my name.
you don't need to recall it.
erase it from your vocabulary.
it's just a meaningless arrangement of letters.

forget my face.
there's no need for recognition.
blur my features from your sight.
i'll just be faceless in the billions.

forget my voice.
no need to hear the silence.
the words are empty now.
there is no need for anything to be said.

forget my memory.
there's no need for a reminder of the times we had.
they are just insignificant moments in time.
no reason to remember.

forget my feelings.
they are meaningless now.
void emotions with nothing attatched.
there is no need to be considerate.
they are nonexistant.
forget me when i'm gone.
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FoxTrotRecruit114 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
Damn right, I couldn't wish for a better description.
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jazewel Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you for writing this.
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Mariampura Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013
This...
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I want to been forget by a person...
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2hardcandy Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
My life in five stanzas. Thankyou for writing this.
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YourCamelIsFat Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Sheer heart-warmer.
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rune4 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Just wow this is so deep and beautiful while still being simple I can relate
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GrailSidhe Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Professional General Artist
Just what I wanted to express, thank you :)
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LadyxXxBug Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011
I can relate to this significantly :) Thanks for this wonderful piece of art!!!
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GirlWithAHat Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You have been [link] ed. :)
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FallinFeathers Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
This is my life. I like it. :D
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Nana-Shin Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2010
:clap:

I just love it. So well said and true...
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:iconjuleskindom:
JulesKindom Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2010
It reflects my feelings right now exactly. Great Job !
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:iconangelic-bewty:
AnGeLiC-BewTy Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
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Stitchybird Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
please please please forget!
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:iconfish655:
Fish655 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010
Very good and so true.
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Gwenni12-o Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010
simply well said
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CarnationXXRains Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Student General Artist
glad someone else can put it in words!
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crimsonsable Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Student Writer
This really speaks to me, especially the last stanza. Great work.
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joy1579 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2010
thank you so much i write to and when my words faild yours spoke i love this!
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Shade-of-Shame Featured By Owner May 28, 2010
love it.
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rawrjustlooking Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's so... depressing. Why forget when you can learn from past experiences and move on?
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For-Whats-In-A-Name Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
I love this...beautifully done. Amazing work. :)
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FliegenLicht Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
An old poem, I know, but I found it today, and it perfectly fits my feelings, so thank you for writing it. :)
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Oana195 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010
Wonderful ...
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n3v3rforg3tthat Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
love this <3
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alsusanimae Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010
beautiful, it's deep and have feeling, what else can you ask for?
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HazySunray Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
adore :love:
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TurotTrainer Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009
This is.. so amazing...

I can relate all too well to this poem...
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cin-vhetin Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009
Very good, like the first stanza the most.
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OceanicLegacy Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009
jt the one i like......nice.
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xFalling-Downx Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
Beautiful work :happycry:
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xXxWolfenaraSayxXx Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009
This is my favorite poem for the week. :D
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This is really good, I'm serious :)
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GeminilyCapricorn Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009
It almost made me cry x'(
Very beautiful (:
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IBelieveInYou Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
i love it
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1315JiNx1315 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2009
oh so beautiful!!! i love it!!!!! :clap:
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desidarium Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
i identified so much with your poem...
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everyart13579 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
This is so good! It's deep.
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Jennie21 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
great..so intense..!
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LOLDEL Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2008
I think this is beautiful.
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your-heart-is-pure Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
very nice! :hug:
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educatedfool89 Featured By Owner May 29, 2008
very well written.

it's featured here [link]
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theblackbride431 Featured By Owner May 18, 2008
I wish I could write like this. Wonderful job!
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Losingmysanity666 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2008   Writer
awesome.
your write wonderfully and from teh heart.
I love this poem.
never stop writing no matter what others say.
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xskatonicx Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2006
i like this. i like this alot. unique style, repiticious, but original and fresh. very expressive voice, bitter and relentless. well done.
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Solburned Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2006
Such a Sad poem, it makes me wanna hug the one suffering.
Everything that is said, holds a bit of truth. But it just a way to protect yourself from the feelings of others's

A beautiful poem nonetheless =D. I like it ^^
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thenshesaid Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2006
thanks so much. its nice to know that someone likes my poetry.
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Solburned Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2006
No problem ^^
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RamblingPhilosopher Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2006
:clap:

Awesome job, great work
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thenshesaid Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2006
thank you soooo much for the compliment.
:)


<3
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